Sometimes I read art reviews and think wt*!# does that mean?! I would say I’m relatively well-versed in understanding principles of design, art, and critical thought as regards artwork. When I read a review in a consumer magazine or post and feel I need to look up words in order to get the gist of what the article is saying, I think that is a fail in communication! (I also think that, at times, it gives the art world a bad wrap.) I’m not suggesting I know all of the lingo out there relevant to critiquing art however, if I’m not understanding easily from a place where I feel I am part of the audience, for whom is it intended and why is it so complicated?! How can we expect to grow an appreciation of art, the industry and culture if we can’t reach beyond the ‘academics’? (That's me venting a little now here are my thoughts on how to use appropriate language.)
Words chosen to share thoughts are important.
As an artist I’ve tried to make sure my artist statement is clear and direct and doesn’t get convoluted with ‘artsy’ words and descriptions. I hope that it states both my intentions and the direction of my art for both collectors and curators. (You’re welcome to jump over to my art website
www.artbyk2.com
to see if it’s a pass or fail in your opinion and let me know why.) Some of my favourite comments from people about my art come from those not in the field at all - simply expressing their thoughts in their own terms [see pic above].
Being understood is most important.
Are there reads that you feel the same about in your industry?
I once had a conversation with a vp in the college and universities field. He said I should share my input or viewpoints with management of orgs as I see things a little differently. he felt I was able to step back and listen from the outside, question and offer a different perspective. To put it in to context, we were discussing a presentation that management had given to their team, and I finally had to say “what the heck does that mean ?” He had to break it down and I said “if I know what you’re talking about and I have no idea what is being said, how do you expect your team to follow?”. They modified the piece for the next group and it was much more successful.
If you’re the writer — know your audience, know where they are coming from, don’t be vague, tailor it to be as widely received as possible! Test it out with someone not as knowledgeable (preferably from your target group) and see where it lands.
Predetermine who you are speaking to and the language that relates to them.
I’m not a professional writer and I know editors that cringe when they read some of my posts or texts to them lol, however I do know that simpler is better and if most understand what I’m saying isn’t that success? Do I know all the corporate lingo out there to describe situations or directions, when to cut a sentence back, when to use square brackets, an ampersand or an em dash (which I love the look of and believe sometimes that’s enough)? I’m not an expert but when I’m having a hard time getting through something, I’m inclined to think while it’s rich in words does it reach the target audience? If the intention is to reach all, then save the wordsmithing for your peer group and break it down to everyday language that the majority will relate to.
KISS
Consider explaining your thoughts to a child and then have them relate it for you! Brings to mind my favourite story of a niece of mine (at about age 8) that attended one of my exhibitions. Always curious about why I put things in the painting or why I used particular colours, we had many conversations and at the show, she was able to explain what my art was about to her father! Simple direct words and descriptions that clarified it for him (even if he still did not like it lol).
Ask a child!
I recognize that the juxtaposition to some of my thoughts create a cacophony of information but hey! hopefully you get my point :) [I love those two words had to throw them in to this!]
Play with words (or paints as I do)
p.s. on acronyms and shortforms !
Yes I use them too (see above) however, one should always stop and think about who you are speaking to. I know, I know, if it’s someone in your own sphere they will likely know but if you need to reach beyond them either explain them as you go or just don’t use them.